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Please lend them your compassion
For this world of ours is cold
Kindness doesn't go out of fashion
And it never gets old
For this world of ours is cold
Kindness doesn't go out of fashion
And it never gets old
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The flow was good, but the third line sounds a bit awkward, maybe because there's an extra syllable?
I think the rhymes were great. Rhyming "compassion" and "fashion" was really unexpected and i liked it.
I like that the title spoke straight to me; it really drew me in.
Overall, the shortness and sweetness of it really gives it a big impact. I like it a lot, good work!
I think the rhymes were great. Rhyming "compassion" and "fashion" was really unexpected and i liked it.
I like that the title spoke straight to me; it really drew me in.
Overall, the shortness and sweetness of it really gives it a big impact. I like it a lot, good work!