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Nothing can bring her down

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She stumbles, but always gets up.
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I wanted to express my gratitude for this girl, she always knew how to make the best of the bad. :)
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3wyl's avatar
I feel you could have approached this differently, direction wise... I do like what you're suggesting, though, and I feel as if the title is quite fitting too...

I like the phrasing and how you've ended on a more optimistic tone to things... it's great how it's like the person keeps on going, no matter what. :nod: